Fifth Grade Writing Blog

Yo, Yo

My name is Joe

I stubbed my toe

On a Cheerio

Yo yo

My name is Joe

I like fried chicken

And I like fried dough

Yo, yo

My name is Joe

I like cold milk

And some Oreos

Yo, yo

My name is Joe

I heard my name

On the radio

Yo, yo

My name is Joe

I learn my name

From the radio

Yo, yo

My name is Joe

My song is over

And that’s all I know

Yo, yo

My name is Joe

Sorry but

I’ve gotta go.

Unanimous

Homework, homework really stinks
I think Kristina would rather wear pink
Teachers assign so much each night
It really is such a fright

Homework, homework why can’t you go away?
I have to stay inside and can’t play
I deal with you day after day
I really wish you would run away

Homework, homework why is there so much to do?
I always think I’m done, but I’m really not through
My brothers are always making me so blue
Because I know I can’t go out too

Tomisin A.

On vacation you just sit and stare.

and you see things as everywhere.

vacations are always fun.

It’s as easy as cracking a pun.

And vacations are fun for everyone.

by the big D

A pen is not just some ink in a thin bottle.
It is more like a flare of different hue.
The flare burn out of the paper, and it looks straight at you.
An excellent tool for anyone to use.
The click of the pen is an injection for the paper, ready to be planted on.
The ink of the pen brings life, slowly building the beautiful writing.
When your fingers wrap around the pen, it is ready to stand out for anyone to see.
It is a phenomenal tool.
So, take a look inside your pen, swirling in there, a writing is waiting to be injected.
                                                             By: Dowon

                                                                found him on our doorstep

in a box covered in christmas paper

in there for hours wrappedin a blanket

no clue who left him

looks like Snots my old cat

-instant mystery of wonder-

looks like Snots my old cat

no clue who left him

in there for hours wrapped in a blanket

in a box wrapped in Christmas paper

found him on our doorstep!

Realing in a good book
Entering a world of storys
A long novel
Dreaming of the charecters

My parents
Kind of awesome
Sometimes annoying
Take me everywhere
Baby my brothers
Won’t buy my an i-pod
Mom is a germaphob
Dad loves weightlifting
They cook, clean, and work all day
Dad loves weightlifting
Mom is a germaphob
Won’t buy me an i-pod
Baby my brothers
Take me everywhere
Sometimes annoying
Kind of awesome
My parents

By: Tomisin A.

My toes are very special,
my toes are attached to me.
They can wiggle,
they can help me walk.
But the bad thing about toes is the green things stuck between them.

By;Queen Constable

Baby billy 

is burping and

bouncing on his

brothers

Bob,Brian,and brad

all at the same time

by SM

tigers
black and orange
pouncing at prey
blending in
sharp teeth
long whiskers
striped bodies
-living in Asia-
striped bodies
long whiskers
blending in
pouncing at prey
black and orange
tigers

By Karen S.

I’m ready. I am going tubing for the first time.

I am nervous. Will I crash?

No, I’m ready.

Now I’m at the top of the mountain.

 WHOOSH!

I’m going down so fast.

I can feel snow hitting my face.

WHOOSH!

Finally, I’m at the bottom.

Now I’m ready, to go again.

By : Pat

PS : Do you think my poem has deep emotion?

delights
chocolate and gum
all wonderful treats
in my sisters dress bag
waiting to be eaten
candy
waiting to be eaten
in my sisters dress bag
 all wonderful treats
chocolate and gum
delights

By:Marc

he can be lazy

  sometimes he sleeps all day

    hates to be disturbed

       never wants to awake

         walkes to his dish

            then gets back in bed

by KRISTINA Z

         writing tools they’re sure are varius today
         Black Ink, so mesmirizing
         the pencil, you better use it
         computer might be a first
          the mechanical pencil shows the beauty of neat
        Are you going? sit down here comes another round.
        the mechanical pencil shows the beauty of neat
      computer might be a first
         the pencil, you better use it
        Black Ink, so mesmerizing
         Writing tools, they’re sure are varius today

                                         By: Dowon

Snowflakes 
Snowflakes falling all over town 
With shiny light it chrashs into people like a bomb
But the people don’t feel anything but the snowflakes wouded in battle
And with every drop one joins another in their everlasting slumber  
        
By: Ritwik M.